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R**Y
This was an MF story before
There are a few grammatical errors but most importantly, this short read left in a lot of the MF language from the original story. This was not an MM read by a long shot. Looks like the author tried to change pronouns and such in the first part of the story but gave up and only did a word find of the MCs name.
P**S
Fine, ok, standard 2.5 stars
Not an exceptional erotic short, but ok. The whole whore to lover thing was a bit over dramatized or maybe under dramatized...*shrugs* its hard to care when there wasn’t much in the way of interesting characters or titillating erotica. And really, if this was supposed to be a fantasy, the author fantasizes that anal sex doesn’t require lube and men who sleep with whores don’t wear condoms. I shuddered through most of the book because lube and condoms weren’t even mentioned.
S**A
Unexpected
I thought I had this story figured out several times and the author went in a different direction each time - I loved that. I thought the writing was fresh and interesting. I just loved the ending.
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