Doctor’s First Transgender Experience: A Transgender Erotica Kindle Edition

After a couple pages, I skimmed through the rest due to the poor writing. I realise it's smut, but there's no reason it can't be well-written. It all reads like it was machine-translated from another language (Russian, perhaps?). It reads like Tommy Wiseau speaks. The girl, whose name escapes me already, would not surprise me if she said, "You are tearing me apart, Doctor!"There are innumerable examples of stilted sentences and phrases throughout, but this early passage was what really made me stop and think, "something isn't right here...""Wait for a second! The feminine figure in front of him was unusually tall for a girl. About 6 feet. Since he was a doctor he could estimate a person’s height so fast. She must be wearing a high-heel, too, he thought. Might be a tall girl."The sexual content was fine, although at times it felt like they were going off a checklist of fetishes. The poor writing may not distract everyone from its central erotic thrust, but I'd advise skipping it all the same, especially considering all the other trans, feminization, and gender-swap stories available (some lighter on the "story" for better or worse). It might be funny to treat like a bad movie when read aloud with friends, though.

Slow at the start but it picks up. Very passionate love making. There are a few typos that causes some problems but easy to over come.

I liked that he fell in love what i didnt like how short it is because i feel like tgere could b something special between the two of them