Gravity Falls: The second summer (Gravity Falls Fan-Fiction | A Second Summer Book 1) Kindle Edition

It was so good! I got scared at one point but the rest of it was awesome!I really wanted Dipped and Mabel to come back and now they did! I couldn't stop reading this at bedtime so I stayed up until the book was over! Then this morning I went back and read it again! I thank Colin Cabana and everyone else who made this book possible! Thank you! 😁

W all love the characters and the premise of the Gravity Falls books. This one was pretty cool,too, but I feel like the author rushed this one because there are many errors and we had to figure out the syntax and full meaning at times. Good plot,okay events,but a bit wobbly,especially the setting ending.

Its a really good book I love gravity falls thanks so much for writing his book I’m really excited for the next part because when Mabel got possessed it got me super exited so I hope you can make more books like this.

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It’s a fun read for an 8 year old. We thought Mabel was cool. On to read the next one

Excellent tale! I can't wait until the next one! The end of the story was really creepy. Really good read.

The good: Characters were in character, and there was a promising ending, and no spelling errors.The bad: full of grammatical errors, lack of punctuation in multiple sentances, no imagery and very little description of objects/people (if any at all!); the events merge into one another to the point of being indistinguishable, the plot is all over the place and lacks thorough structure, and not even the slightest bit of relevant character development is posed.However, I can still kinda tell where the author(s) were going with this. As a dedicated fan, I am desperate for more of the show's mystery, and this fanfiction is a good place to look if you want more.There are some very important things the authors of this need to know.-FOR LEGAL REASONS, YOU NEED A DISCLAIMER. You can be fined or even sued for using other's fictionl characters. You must, at the beginning, acknowledge that these charactefs are not your own, and that you own none of the gravity falls franchise.- the axolotl is a mexican amphibean, look up for more information. Use this as you please.- You are really good at writing. The characters were perfectly in character. Please don't be discouraged by my review- all that I'm asking is for a drafted version before an edited final copy. Tips: ask yourself if sentances make sense, do a peer review, and add detiled descriptions. Assume the reader has never watched the show before. Never lose heart. Also, remember: REALITY IS AN ILLUSION. THE UNIVERSE IS A HOLOGRAM. BUY GOLDBYYYYYYYYYE!

If you are nostalgic for Gravity Falls, this will disappoint you.The story jumps around without a coherent plot. It references some of the best episodes, but only to lull the reader into thinking this could become better, it doesn't! in addition, grammatical errors add to the difficulty of reading. Skip reading the "second summer" and rewatch the series you will thank me.

The story was definitely rushed and there was a lot of mistakes, for example Ford is referred to as Dipper's grandfather but he is his great uncle, the use of the axolotl was a bit boring as he only had about 10 lines despite being the main antagonist, some of the dialogue between characters seemed both pointless and dry, particularly when Wendy is cursed and dipper helps her, an entire scene was dedicated to 5 lines of dialogue that made no differed to the story, I will however give credit for creativity in actually involving the Axolotl, mentioned in bills original death message, I think with a longer story, a sub story, and major character development (especially axolotl) this could be a genuinely good story to read.

This book is really strange and confusing the storyline makes no sense I would not buy this if i were u I regret buying it