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K**N
The Relic of the Lush Arcane
So. I don’t dislike it. I think it was a great start. And I can wait to see it grow more. It was really short. I think it’s great grow a for something more. There great detail about their surroundings. The only think I could say against it is the repetitive of some words like collaboration and the multiple times that their jobs were descry. But it was still done really well. It the character was giving me treasure planet vibes for sure though.But again I think the author have growns for something really good. I just think there need to be more. Like bulid up. Or struggle they came across. I really missed conversations. It’s mentioned they working with each other it would have been nice to hear those conversations.
S**R
Terrific writing!
Chirag Rajpal is clearly a natural storyteller, as demonstrated in "The Relic of the Lush Arcane."It is fairly short. I read it in less than an hour, but I quickly became invested in the characters and their stories. I would have liked to have gotten to know each character more. I feel like we only brushed the surface of who they are and what motivated them.I would have also liked to have seen more specific details on what challenges the team faced on their journey through the rainforest and temple, and how the different characters unique expertise contributed to their survival.Rajpal is a natural storyteller that immediately captured my attention with the beauty and passion he weaves between his words. I look forward to his future work!
V**A
amazing read!
I typically don’t read this genre of book, but I’m so grateful I gave this a chance! The eloquence of the author is astonishing! I’d love to read more of their work!
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