Sinless (Deadly Omen Book 1)

Sinless is the debut novel from this brand new author, Jenica Saren. Whilst the start was a little slow for me, the story was interesting enough to pull me through to where the story and writing started to meld together and pick up pace. The first 50% of the book is more about the character and the world building and the second half of the book is where we start to discover more about the mystery that is the Severin brothers.I liked the main character Ria, she is sassy enough to hold her own and confident in herself. I found her internal debates and battles with herself humorous and particularly liked that she's not a character who is "innocent" or "pure", she's a stripper and she's proud of it, because why shouldn't she be! The Severin brothers are a mixture, one in particular is rude to Ria, but I'm secretly hoping he falls harder for her as I love me an arrogant man who falls hard.The book didn't end on a cliffhanger, but it did end with me wanting to know what will happen next. I'm looking forward to reading the next book in the series when it's released and finding out more about Ria, Drea and the Severin brothers.

A fantastic start to the series. A must read. The story resolves around Ria and the other six deadly sins. Ria is a sassy stripper who will have you laughing from beginning to end. As the story progresses you learn the heart ache and horror Ria has had to face, leading her to stumble across her men and her new BFF Drew. From the first page this book will keep you engaged right up to the end. Plenty of drama ready for the next instalment.

This was much more awesome than I thought. It started a bit slow and I struggled with the MC referring to herself in third person but this does get explained later in the book but I wish it had been addressed earlier. I really enjoyed seeing the relationships grow ans look forward to seeing more of clove's mischief ;)

I love books about the 7 deadly sins. This definitely was on par! I love the dynamic between the characters and I have a very obvious suspicion who Ria's inner voice is. Clive definitely has something going on, she noticed something and that's why she brought everyone together. Im too excited to find out more in the next

The story and plot were good. The characters were a good mix and you want to know more about them. The reason it’s not a 5 star was the grammar and spelling mistakes. They got worse as you went through the book. Also there was definitely plot holes where something seems to be missing from the text so it doesn’t make sense. Also they like to laugh a lot and I mean a lot. Book 2 is out but I’m undecided if I want to go on.

It personally wasn't my kind of book but it was okay and I think most people will like it. I didn't like it cause the guys treated Ria horribly and she just kept coming back for more. She should have been constantly dizzy as they pushed her away only to drag her back. My least favourite character was Drea. She was so weak and irritating and the guys kept pandering to her. Ria needs a new set of guys or even just one guy to put her first.

The story is pretty solid, good characters but seriously it lost a star because it seriously hasn't been proof read or edited..so many spelling and grammar errors..little details like that just irritate me and kinda ruin the story a bit but other wise look I g forward to book 2

I really liked this book. Can't wait to see what happens next.