Rising Sun: New Moon Series, Book 3

This book, indeed all 3 of the books in the series, are written in a rather juvenile language and the author is desperately in need of a good editor. Just about every single page is littered with typos, missing words and incorrect usage of terms (to/too, their/there, scared/sacred, intimate/intimidate) which I find very distracting and loses one full star from my rating.In one sentence the main character will say something, then repeat it unnecessarily in the next sentence.The different chapter POVs from the guys just show them all to be the same guy with usually one different characteristic and make them seem rather wooden. Another star removed.The bedroom scenes read more like young adult even though the characters acted older. The supposed MM themes were just that, some kisses and groping and could have been developed further, but this series really does not work on development at all.The general story was interesting and that's what kept my attention and is deserved of the 3 stars.I think with better editting this story could have crept up to about 4.5 stars. I sincerely hope the author does find one and soon. I don't have editting skills nor can I write fiction but I would have done a better job at fixing the typos.This book in particular seems very rushed. The actual story finished about 40% in and the rest was messing about with getting read for a wedding/whatever - minus another star.

Totally loved this series. I started with the freebie from prime and couldn’t resist the other 2 as soon as I finished one on to the next and I’m pretty sure I’ll read them again, some of the hot scenes even more and more and more...anyone know where I can some shifter mates?.?Strong characters none too perfect and not given every tiny detail about them either physical or mental so my imagination could finish them off so much more real to me.Really please that it hasn’t been dragged into a never ending series just to make money. Thank you for a great read.

The last book in the series and in my opinion its saved the best until last. Its definitely one that tugs at your heartstrings - Josh (what a sweetie) and Rafferty (i just wanted to hug him) more so than the other books. I also found that it was slower paced but it didnt detract from the story. The steam was rising too. A particular one being Lexi, Galen and Maverick together. Smoking Hot!!! I loved Lexi's relationship with Ada & i cant wait to read her book. This was a brilliant read but im sad its ended though

I loved this series, the first two books had me dying to know the ending. I'm just sad the finally book felt so... lackluster. Most of the way through it seemed rushed, didn't cover the story counts I really wanted, like where was the training of her powers with her father? What was the new power she started to show? Where was her night with Maverick after Prom? And her mother, what was the story there? There was so much I wanted to know, so many questions unanswered. Not to mention the constant grammatical errors that even my dyslexic brain picked up and tricked over more than usual. A few I can understand, but this.... this was more than that.

I have no idea what has happened to this series but this book was a load of rubbish! The entire book was about there feelings and the main caracter has turned into an annoying person. I kept waiting for action to kick in but nothing happend. I will not be continuing this series

I enjoyed all 3 books.Couldn't put it down but I do feel it was a little rushed.The end I get it you can always come back and write another one.I was hope she would get to meet her aunt and grandpa.Also wanted Mavericks sex seen with her everyone else got one. (On there own)But great books.

Really enjoyed this book look forward to the next i have pre ordered so excited to find out what happens next highly recommend

Seemed rushed and full of errors (as if dictated and not edited properly) nothing like the standard of the previous books. Very disappointing