The Lions of Lucerne

"For reasons of national security, certain names, places, and tactical procedures have been changed within this novel."We're off to a bad start, Brad. It's a novel. What (fictional) names need to be changed? What "tactical procedures" need to be changed? There may be no cavernous, built-out place in the side of a mountain with a church on top as the entry point in Switzerland where the Swiss store their war-like stuff, but again: it's a novel.The book opens with a prologue. Tsk. I'm not against prologues in general, but when I am, it's because of prologues like this one, where the bad guys lay out their dastardly plans so we'll absolutely know the hero, Scot Horvath, is not involved. We also get a monologue from one, just so we know how bad he is and get the supposed motivation for this entire thing. Oh, don't worry - if you have trouble remembering any of it, you'll get told again at the end, when one character explains to Horvath the motivation of the bad guys.On a side note, if there is one phrase I wish writers would lose, forever, it has to be "As you know..." If they know, why are you telling them? That's rhetorical, of course, because I know why: you have to info dump on the reader instead of organically introducing the information like a better writer would.The first chapter takes us to Utah, where the president of the US (hereafter as POTUS) is on a skiing vacation with his daughter. Horvath, former SEAL turned Secret Service, is the lead on the protection, and he is with the daughter. When it's time to return to the cabin, POTUS and his cover detail go one way and the daughter and Horvath's detail go another.Horvath sees a couple of agents run into trees and fall down, and jokes with the others in his detail they were lucky to be going down the easier run. Then, there's an avalanche. Of course.Horvath picks up the daughter and tries to ski both of them to protection behind some boulders, but oh no! He's off target. Then he wraps his body around hers as the avalanche catches up and they bounce down the hill, eventually reaching the area he was aiming for, and there they are, as the avalanche rushes past them and eventually stops. Then Superman - I mean, Horvath, proceeds to dig them out, take off much of his own clothing to put on the daughter, and starts trekking down the mountain until they are found by members of the detail that were stationed in the cabin.OK, that's all fine. I'm willing to suspend my disbelief on that. On the other side of the coin, the supposedly super smart, I'd-die-for-POTUS Secret Service detail has thought nothing of the radios and sensors popping in and out all day long - until they can't raise the detail covering POTUS.This is not a spoiler, because it's in the synopsis of the book: Thor helpfully tells us that the bad guys have been lying around in the snow, waiting for POTUS, and tells us exactly how they snatch him off the mountain, first using some super gadget thing that blasts the agents so they are disoriented. So, to keep in mind: the agents think the woods and snow are responsible for the total lack of communications, and we're supposed to believe that the bad guys managed to a) camp out in the heavy snow waiting for POTUS, when the Secret Service and any other law enforcement have cleared the area and are patrolling, who b) amazingly, skis right into the area the bad guys are waiting. What a happy coincidence! As is the angry Muslim one of the bad guys shoots and leaves behind, because as we know, only brown people commit terrorism.Much of the book is tedious and aggravating. There's the bad guys driving a semi - in heavy, wet snow, on a mountain - to a cabin where they kill a couple of old people and then take off in the ambulance that was hauled up in that trailer, POTUS in the back.Horvath appears to be the only one with a brain amongst the agencies, because he is seeing things that are obvious clues and no one else seems to notice a thing, ever. But of course, they don't listen to him, because it was his detail that was killed, allowing POTUS to be taken.Now we go into SPOILERS:Naturally, Horvath has to stomp all over the various crime scenes, and just as naturally, things start popping up that point to him as the ringleader of it all. It's ludicrous, and even the people who know him best, and have worked with him longest, are ready to believe he's turned into a sociopath and torpedoed his own protection detail. He also appears to lose his super detector ring, because he does some terribly stupid things - or continues to, since any rational agent would work with the teams to determine what happened, not go lone wolf agent right off the bat. I could buy that act once the frame against him really builds up, but not at the very start of the investigation.By the way, the daughter? Once former SEAL Horvath disobeys (of course) doctor's orders and starts doing his own investigation instead of letting the various agencies do their jobs, the daughter isn't mentioned again until toward the end of the book.There's a (beautiful, of course) Swiss female agent trying to track down a shipment of stolen weapons, and we just know their paths are going to cross, because the guy she really wants to question is the same bad guy who engineered the kidnapping. What a coincidence!The usual countersurveillance maneuvers are detailed, along with a ton of other, unnecessary stuff. There's a big speech about a wine, there's the closeted, but powerful Senator with a secret lover, who - in yet another subplot - cozied himself up to the Senator because his previous boyfriend was the Senator's previous boyfriend as well, and the boyfriend was killed in a driveby shooting with another man. The secret lover just happens to be listening in on a phone call that cements what an evil jackhole the Senator is. What a coincidence!Horvath's friend needs to see him, and she brings along the secret lover, who spills his guts to Horvath, and we all know what that means. Yep, taken out, shot execution style with former SEAL Horvath's own weapon, which he is unable to find in the mess of his apartment that has obviously been tossed by the bad guys. What a coincidence!There's another thing that irritates me to no end: the confirmation confirmation confirmation dialogue. it goes like this:Person A: This looks like ABC because XYZ.Person B: You mean XYZ???? By ABC?Person A: Exactly. It's ABC doing XYZ.Yeah, we get it already. We don't need to be told the same piece of information three times just because you're trying to help us recall who the bad guys are and what they're into. It's even worse when the same character does it all alone.Speaking of dialogue: it was terrible. A bunch of macho posturing, and far too much witty banter (or attempts at it, anyhow). It simply was not good. Trite phrases, simple, declarative sentences - I'd say probably written at a junior high level.Former SEAL Horvath gets beaten up, shot, runs on no sleep, etc. - all the things you associate with an invincible hero. Did I mention he's a former SEAL?He teams up with the Swiss agent after a mountainside attempted assassination of himself and possibly her, only to go right back to the town he was staying in. Great thinking, former SEAL Horvath, they'll never find you there, until they do.The rest is a mash of hokey action: when Horvath is about to be killed on a riverbank, the Swiss agent kills the bad guy. When they're in the cavern in the mountain, a bad guy has his gun on Horvath, but of course has to give a little speech first, allowing the Swiss agent to save him again. They find the stolen weapons in the mountain, and another bad guy is about to shoot former SEAL Horvath when the cavalry arrives just in time to blow the bad guy's head off. Wow! Such action! Many coincidence!It could have been a good story. But it isn't, and I'm not convinced that some oil billionaire would be able to conspire with two Senators, the Vice President, and the head of an intelligence agency to kidnap POTUS. That's simply too many fingers in the pie. Good thing the Senators and the VP end up dead to let us know some kind of justice is done for them. Former SEAL and current Secret Service agent Horvath then gets to relive his SEAL days by meting out more justice on the oil billionaire.The descriptions of some places is interesting, but either Thor was being paid by the word, or someone said, you know what this needs? Ponderous description down to the teeniest detail. the reader will love it! No, they do not. At least this reader didn't.Two stars: my automatic one star for writing the thing. The other for some kind of semblance of a plot, even if it relied on way too many coincidences and there was zero mystery to the reader in any of it. Did I mention the hero is a former SEAL?Recommended when there's nothing else to read, or when you need something that doesn't take a ton of concentration.

I’ve read other Scot Harvath books, so I decided it was time to start at the beginning. I am so glad I did. This is hands down my favorite read so far. I was already a Harvath fan but now I’m even more so. Getting ready to start the second book in the series. Mr. Thor has written so many I’ve got my work cut out for me. But hey, this is work that is truly fun!

I ordered the book used, and when I received it it was in excellent shape. I did not encounter any issues. I would buy from this seller again.

A bit implausible but, a very good read.

The Lions of Lucerne is a fast-paced thriller introducing the rouge ex-navy seal/secret service agent, Scot Harvath, who is not only good looking (probably looks just like the author), but super-strong, super-smart, super-human, and able to get himself out of any difficult situation. Most readers welcome this kind of character as he represents the fact that good guys can actually win. Harvath will remind readers of Mitch Rapp, Vince Flynn's CIA hero, where although the scenarios are barely believable and plausible, it's still exciting when it's happening in the books.The story begins in Utah's Park City, where Harvath is in charge of the pre-trip detail of a ski trip taken by the widowed President of the United States and his daughter, whom he wants to spend some quality time with. During the trip, the president is kidnapped and dozens of federal agents are killed. The bad guys, who become known to the reader, and eventually the main characters as the story unfolds, sabotage Harvath's credibility, and he is under the gun to be fired and face murder charges. Of course he is innocent, and travels to several places to find the perpetrators, clear himself, and rescue the president. During the process, he's shot at on a regular basis, and for some reason fails to evade the villains, since they find him wherever he ends up. Before working for the secret service, he was an athlete and while on several ski and snowboard teams, traveled the world. So when he goes to Switzerland, he calls on an old friend to help him hide and solve the case. His old friend puts him in touch with a Swiss federal agent (beautiful, smart, and female, of course), and together they try to avoid death while working to expose the evil perpetrators.There is enough suspense to prevent a reader from putting the book down, but the author adds enough of his own understated humor to keep it not only enjoyable, but light enough to continue reading and feeling good at the same time. When Harvath visits Utah, Washington, and Switzerland, it seems that Thor has researched the areas, so the location information rings true to those who are familiar. Personally, having grown up in Utah, I found that the Park City and Midway parts of the book were right on; with Thor's good writing, it is possible to imagine the area without having been there, so it stands to reason that the other areas are probably accurate.However, there is one place where Thor has not done his research, and has relied on hearsay and rumors that are obviously not from a legitimate source, and from some misguided propoganda. He presents Utah mainstream Mormons as dim-witted blind followers of some kind of cult where the only thing important is to not offend the other members and appear devout. One couple, who will later be murdered by the bad guys, is attending their "almost five-hour Sunday Services" (Mormon Sunday services are 3-hour blocks, not almost 5) and, "Mary, ever the devout follower, listened intently as the bishop spoke about the role of a good Mormon wife and reminded his flock that it was only through a husband's proclamation that a wife would be accepted into the Celestial Kingdom." Shame on you, Mr. Thor, for not checking out the facts on the religion that plays a key role in setting up the scene that helps the bad guys and shapes the story. The bishop is usually not the speaker (his role is totally different from a preacher who prepares weekly sermons) during Sunday services - speakers are generally chosen from members of the LDS wards or stakes - and on the rare occasion that he is, he has a talk prepared on one of many subjects like faith, charity, and honesty. The subject discussed in the book, which is extremely skewed as far as Mormon Doctrine is concerned, is most-likely not a subject preached about at a regular weekly meeting. Thor has obviously gotten mainstream Mormonism confused with a polygamist cult.Because most of the book is well-written and exciting, it's easy to forgive Mr. Thor for his deceptive and misleading claims of Mormon beliefs. I've found that the majority of mainstream fiction is based on fictional characters in settings that are real, and most fiction authors do extensive research before writing so that their books are believable. Most of us who are reading the Lions of Lucerne will probably believe the parts that we are unfamiliar with. Unfortunately, I will from now on have doubts on the credibility of Mr. Thor's "facts," but that will not prevent me from reading his entire series of novels, since they are, well - in a word - thrilling.If you are looking for a good series, want to start with the first, and want a fast-paced fun novel, I highly recommend The Lions of Lucerne.

What an action packed story. Scot is fearless smart and apparently has nine lives. A fun read. Can’t wait to see what his next adventure is.

As another reviewer said: How many injuries -- and how many near death circumstances -- can a man take?His snow-stuff befuddled me. The author obviously has done some skiing. He knows some snow-stuff. But I can't place what the level of that knowledge is. ...until they started to ascend thousands of meters in snowmobile-suits -- or "skiing suits" with "releasing the zipper a little to let out som warmth from time to time. And then climbing snow by cutting toe holds and hammering in pittons with ice axes. -- That author hasn't ascended many mountains, and hasn't climbed any snow. I've finished 90% of the book. I don't think I can finish a book I have to put away twice per page.Frederick Forsyth and Jan Guillou made some errors. But they didn't reached a density of some per page.

If you are a fan of the great books by Vince Flynn (God rest his soul) or Lee Child's Jack Reacher novels, then you'd be forgiven for buying Brad Thor's first Scot Harvath novel, because so many people (including respected critics) have favourably compared this novel to the work of the aforementioned authors.Oh dear. What can I say about the Lions of Lucerne? I really wanted to like it. I really did, but tonight I decided that enough is enough, and just about half way through the book, I have decided that life's too short to continue reading this poor book.The President of USA has been kidnapped and our 'hero', who is one dimensional, obnoxious and happy to 'punch people's lights out' without much provocation, is probably going to sort the situation out. Frankly, I no longer care. Scot Harvath is not likeable and it's hard to believe that he's a highly trained Agent, who excelled as a Navy SEAL ... etc. etc.Stick with Vincent Flynn's Mitch Rapp or Tom Cain's Carver, or Ben Coes' Andreas, Andy McNab's Nick Stone and so on. Please don't waste your time on Brad Thor!

My title says it all really. This felt a lot like an American version of James Bond. Multiple beautiful women, travelling around the world, often a woman companion to aid in his gun battles and fights.It was a cracking action book and I'm glad I've now found another action series worth reading. Didn't quite blow me away like The Gray Man or The Terminal List did, but no other action books have. I look forward to reading the sequel at some point. Also nice to see an action character with a bit of a sense of humour and personality!

It’s just ok. Our hero isn’t the sharpest tool in the box and he’s also not near aggressive enough. Reacher, Gentry, Rapp et all would run this guy ragged.

Brad Thor is a name to be reckoned with in the genre of political thrillers and this book lives up to expectations. Secret Service Agent Scott Harvarth finds himself in more than enough trouble when the President of the United States is kidnapped, and from there the plot moves along thick and fast. I found myself reading long after I should have put the book down and finished it in record time. I would recommend anyone to buy this, or any other Brad Thor book as you will not be disappointed.